You guys are really coming into stride when it comes to the art on here, especially facial proportions and colouring. Not to say that it wasn’t good earlier, but you can tell how it’s progressed with all of the work you’ve done with it. Just small things are what look a bit out of proportion anymore, I’m finding, and I love it! The girls are also looking distinctly a bit less … masculine, and seem to have their own structures which, I find, is hard to pick out in other webcomics. Good Job guys!
The only thing that I can find that’s been consistant in all of the pages, is that their heads seem tucked into their necks, when most people, when tilted in these directions, have chins that stick out further. But it’s a small tidbit. I’m sorry if that was a bit unwanted, but take it as you will, I love your work, and how Taryn’s developed, with Kasumi’s addition. She irked me at first but I adore her now.
Maybe try saying it in the words of Kasumi’s people?
“Oooh, Kasumi-san, what would your husband think?”
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